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May 01

Twirling banners dancing in the sunlight

shimmering joyfully across rolling greens

dazzling colours and lights so bright.

Delicious feats of rice and beans

shouts of joy echoing in the morning sky

bare-footed children running wild on grass

choreographed clouds floating up high.

Lost souls engraved in our hearts but alas

the hearts rejoice the rebirth of freedom,

the return of smiles, the air of peace.

with castles of hope and kingdoms of love.

Humanity united at long last

the bloody wars have finally ceased

with lingering shadows of the past

and many loved ones now deceased.

2:54 PM | Blog it | ~*Poetry*~

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	Stephenwrote: I know I have already commented on this one, but i simply LOVE this poem! Very Well done! Thanks so much for your recent visit, and for your very kind words. Hope this finds you well and safe. Cheers, steve p.s. By the by - I stopped by over at your face book place and enjoyed browsing through your pix - Thanks for sharing them. I was not at all surprised to discover that you are indeed as lovely on the outside as you are within. s. Aug. 2
	Margewrote: You've had so much going on in recent weeks, Randa, I hope you're finding time to fuss over yourself a little. I've missed your words here; please come back soon? Please be safe. Always, Marge July 23
	Margewrote: Hi, Randa! You haven't posted for awhile; is everything okay? I hope your studies are going well and you have a little "me" time to look forward to. I'm sending good thoughts and my best hopes your way. Please be safe. Always, Marge June 29
	Margewrote: Hi, Randa... It's been awhile since you've posted; are you okay? I'm thinking of you..Please be safe Always, Marge June 25
	Sanjana Shahwrote: just dropped by to check if you had updated. i guess you still busy. hope to catch up with you soon princess. June 23
	Sanjana Shahwrote: just dropped by to check if you had updated. i guess you still busy. hope to catch up with you soon princess. June 23
	Stephenwrote: Hiya Randa! You know, I just realized the last time I was here I failed to comment on this poem. It is extraordinary, definitely one of your best that I have seen! Bright and hopeful, as poems written by a young lady should be. Well done my friend! Very well done indeed! stephen June 16
	Kathryn Magendiewrote: It has been forever since I've dropped by - hello! June 5
	RAM modrowrote: WOW! Awesome! Randa! This is one of your BEST POEMS I have read! It says so much and is full of hope for the future. You Rock My Word Dear Sister! HUGS, Ron June 5
	Holywrote: Hey - stopping by to wish you well with your exams and final projects. Take care! June 1
	Sanjana Shahwrote: hi sweetie. just dropped in to say a quick hi where you been??? ive missed you both here on spaces as well as in my chat window. hehe. se you around alligator. May 30
	Sanjana Shahwrote: hi sweetie. just dropped in to say a quick hi where you been??? ive missed you both here on spaces as well as in my chat window. hehe. se you around alligator. May 30
	Sanjana Shahwrote: hi sweetie. just dropped in to say a quick hi where you been??? ive missed you both here on spaces as well as in my chat window. hehe. se you around alligator. May 30
	Sanjana Shahwrote: hi sweetie. just dropped in to say a quick hi where you been??? ive missed you both here on spaces as well as in my chat window. hehe. se you around alligator. May 30
	Stephenwrote: Hi Randa, thank you so much for stopping by, it is always good to see you! Hope things are good with you, and that your studies are going well. We can only hope that the words of your poem here will someday become a reality. Someday soon... stephen May 29
	Margewrote: Here I am again, Randa... I wanted to read your poem again. It's Memorial Day here in the US. We remember and honor our war dead; many of us also pray for the ending of hostilities so no more lives must be lost to war. Many have been praying for a long, long time. I also pray that the violence will stop in your country and every country where our young ones face losing the wonderful future which is their birthright. Please be safe. Always, Marge May 28
	Sanjana Shahwrote: Humanity united at long last the bloody wars have finally ceased with lingering shadows of the past and many loved ones now deceased. What an ending dear for such a wonderful peotry. always there willbe a ray of sunshine,w e just got to look hard for it. lovely peotry and the last lines were touching......... May 22
	Ghada Dessoukywrote: nice :) may ur poem come true....AMEN :) post the one u won the radio contest with ;) a little pride is in order here :) see u in the near future lol May 13
	Margewrote: What a beautiful dream, Randa: "...Humanity united at long last the bloody wars have finally ceased..." How we all long for this. Your poem expresses the long-sought joy and celebration of peace which continues to elude us. May it come to us soon. Please be safe. Always, Marge Always, May 8

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